Planning for your Final Draft

I didn't get to write the couple of milestones and the draft for the paper, my goal for this week will definitely be finish the milestones and finish the paper to be all caught up for ENG103


The two areas I will be working on for the research paper specifically is:
1) Making a stronger thesis
2) making more stronger works cited, to ensure no plagiarism

Research Paper draft

11/15/10

Right now in my pleminary draft I'm currently thinking on what to write in my introduction, and chaining it to my thesis statement.

I need to finish organizing the essay structure so it'll be easy tto finish it for mondaiy.

The Sample Research Paper

What I like about the research paper is that, it alot of resources so we know her information isn't wrong. One thing l don't like is that she did not cite correctly so she should work on that.

Sharing a Source

The most important source that I have found so far is Ray Kurzweilz, The Singularity about how he's optimistic on how robots and  technology will be positive impact on the future. It's important to my discussion because he expresses how optimistic it is that robots will help everyday human life while not looking at the negative aspects of it. It help explains a part of my paper on how what are the results if we don't look at the negative aspects of robots technology surpassing humanity. One other source that helps explain my paper is The Matrix film from 1999. The film help explains what I'm saying on how robots take over humanity and what can be the deadly results of it.